How crazy I’m for you


 

Why are you failing to read my silence?

Why don’t you know how crazy I’m for you?

Why don’t you feel that possessiveness upon me?

 

I become weak when you avoid me

I become mad and sad when my love is denied

I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.

 

Is it my fault to place myself in you?

Is it my possessiveness which enigmas me?

Is it my failure to let you know my unspoken love?

 

I can’t withstand this anymore

I can’t ever be myself without you in me

I can’t ever live without that craziness in me.

 

love

 

About

The author is a Quality Assurance professional by experience. Part Quantitative data analyst, part consultant for quality and information security practices, part software tester, she is a writer by passion and blogs at http://wordsandnotion.com and http://qualitynotion.com/.

One thought on “How crazy I’m for you

  1. jncthedc

    January 6, 2016 at 4:41pm

    Powerfully written with strong emotions. These sentiments are real and experienced by so many people. Sharing your poem will likely help people take emotions and translate them into actions. Well done.

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      Akhila

      January 7, 2016 at 7:37am

      Thank you so much.. You are really inspiring me to write more..:) thanks again

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  2. Visakha

    January 6, 2016 at 4:56pm

    Those flowers in the snap! “Chethi poo” right?! 🙂

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      Akhila

      January 7, 2016 at 7:36am

      oh.. Yea.. You identified it, Visakha.. flowers in the garden at my home 🙂

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      • Visakha

        January 7, 2016 at 7:38am

        😀 We got plenty of those short shrubs around our lawn too! 🙂

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          Akhila

          January 7, 2016 at 7:39am

          oh.. really.. I like them a lot.. easily maintainable too.. where are you living..?

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    • thecucumbercity

      January 7, 2016 at 11:28am

      We call it “Thechi” 🙂

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      Akhila

      January 7, 2016 at 6:35am

      Thanks Jason.. Yeah.. Having a great new year.. 😉
      Wish you too a wonderful new year..

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  3. thecucumbercity

    January 7, 2016 at 6:12am

    Nice one, loved the verse “I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.”

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      Akhila

      January 8, 2016 at 5:15am

      really… 🙂 thank you so much. I ma happy that you liked it.. Have a great time..

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  4. ANM7

    January 8, 2016 at 12:13am

    Good work, very meaningful. I get what you are saying. Investing your self into the life of another, yet no commitment has been established, and no true ritual of communication.

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  5. Jodine

    January 8, 2016 at 6:12am

    Is it meant to be ‘I’m’ or ‘I am’? Just wondering as I found this a distraction that took me away from your poem. I too have been crazy in love 🙂 Jx

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      Akhila

      January 8, 2016 at 10:34am

      hmm.. true. happy that you understood.. 🙂

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  7. Nisthur Anadi

    January 10, 2016 at 8:13am

    Can’t be better than this.
    It’s Akhila who can complie such beautiful words and create awesome poem.

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      Akhila

      January 13, 2016 at 4:15am

      oh.. I am so glad that you found it beautiful.. thanks a lot friend.. have a good day!!

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      Akhila

      January 15, 2016 at 6:06am

      infact i was.. somehow it became not-followed. so did it again..:)

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      Akhila

      January 16, 2016 at 3:49pm

      Thank you for your comment friend. Have a great time

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  8. akeem54

    January 17, 2016 at 3:27pm

    Very deep and extraordinary feeling. It may also require deep patience.

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      Akhila

      January 17, 2016 at 3:42pm

      You said it right. Thanks a lot for understanding. ..☺

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  9. aishahnaaz

    January 19, 2016 at 5:17am

    Your writings are always deep! 🙂 and that flower, we call it thechi.
    Did I just find a malayalee?? 😀 I’m new around here and you’re the first malayalee on my list!

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      Akhila

      January 19, 2016 at 4:30pm

      Oh..really. so I am that lucky gal to be first on your malayalee bloggers list. Are u living in Kerala

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      Akhila

      February 3, 2016 at 8:47am

      Thanks a lot for thinking about me.
      But recently I made my blog an award free one. So I hope you will excuse me if I don’t participate in this..once again thank you so much for your consideration

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  10. Nisthur Anadi

    July 15, 2016 at 12:07pm

    This ecstatically romantic , so powerful emotions read it again but loved repeating.

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      • K. Bellamy with a Purpose

        August 11, 2016 at 11:14am

        Feeling more love than ever before. But, I can express my love openly and freely so I don’t feel as tired. Although, I am aiming at expressing my love even more openly, and freely in the physical.

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