മുളനാദം

By | July 3, 2016

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കൂട്ടായൊരു മുളനാദമായൊഴുകി

ഒരുകാലത്ത് കണ്ണന്‍റെ ചുണ്ടിലെ രാഗത്തെ നെഞ്ചിലേറ്റിയ ഓടമരങ്ങളുടെ മര്‍മ്മരം ഇരമ്പിക്കൊണ്ടിരുന്ന വണ്ടികളുടെ അലര്‍ച്ചയില്‍ അലിഞ്ഞില്ലാതായി. ഒരു നിമിഷം ഏകയായി ആ മര്‍മ്മരത്തില്‍ ലയിച്ചില്ലാതായെങ്കില്‍…

0 thoughts on “മുളനാദം

  1. shilpamohan5

    Nice chechee..angane endellamo illathayippoyirikkunnu lle,arinjathum ariyathathumayi endokkeyo…

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    1. Akhila Post author

      true dear.. you captured my feeling correctly.. we have moved into a busy world losing those sweetest things..

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  2. chembaneer

    Malayalathilulla kavithakal kanumbol swantham veetil poyapolulla sukhamanu…nannayittundu Akhila

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    1. Akhila Post author

      thanks Hari..is it a kavitha.. i donno.. but I know it is the pain of my heart..nostalgic heart..

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      1. myheartbeats4ublog

        akhila… hridayathinte vedana nalloru kavithayaayittu varumbo… that itself acts as a soothing balm and stems the pain!!!

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  3. Akhila Post author

    ha ha..if i translate this , malayalee readers will definitely kick me out of the blogosphere because of my excellence in translating emotions..lol

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  4. Akhila Post author

    thank you Sahodara..in fact this is from a techiworld.. there we have a bamboo tree near our building

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  5. chithankalai

    So, I am not alone! I know certain things are ‘said better’ in the mother tongue. But try your best to translate… When I was editing a Tamil journal I carried translations of Pavithran theekkunni, Mukunthan to name a few. N D Rajkumar translated them, if I remember correct. This is what ‘sharing’ is all about Akhila. One John Smallshaw should be brought here while a Pavithran should be transferred to a poetry camp in
    the banks of Thames.

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    1. Akhila Post author

      yeah.. true.. i really appreciate your suggestion..let me see what best can be done

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  6. Manu Michael sdb

    നഷ്ടപ്പെട്ട ഇന്നലകൾ! ഇല്ലാതായ നന്മകൾ… അങ്ങനെ എന്തെല്ലാം …

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        1. Akhila Post author

          oh.. really.. thank you.. but you complemented Akila.. who’s that..? 😉

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          1. Akhila Post author

            oh my god.. such a blind complement..you know, i prefer critics rather than complements..;)

  7. Manu Michael sdb

    U r views about things r realistic. U seems to long for the childhood, which we had (or had a little) and what the generations to come have lost for ever

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    1. Akhila Post author

      yeah.. we entered into a busy life and rarely get such odd moments of silence in a busy life

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