തെന്നലെന് ചാരെയണയുമ്പോ-
ളൊരു നാദമായി ഞാനൊഴുകി
തെന്നിയണയും തെന്നലിന്
കൂട്ടായൊരു മുളനാദമായൊഴുകി
ഒരുകാലത്ത് കണ്ണന്റെ ചുണ്ടിലെ രാഗത്തെ നെഞ്ചിലേറ്റിയ ഓടമരങ്ങളുടെ മര്മ്മരം ഇരമ്പിക്കൊണ്ടിരുന്ന വണ്ടികളുടെ അലര്ച്ചയില് അലിഞ്ഞില്ലാതായി. ഒരു നിമിഷം ഏകയായി ആ മര്മ്മരത്തില് ലയിച്ചില്ലാതായെങ്കില്…
What does this mean in English ? 😀
Good question.. hmm.. but let me try to answer… lol
Nice chechee..angane endellamo illathayippoyirikkunnu lle,arinjathum ariyathathumayi endokkeyo…
true dear.. you captured my feeling correctly.. we have moved into a busy world losing those sweetest things..
Mm.. Let us rethink and get them back
Malayalathilulla kavithakal kanumbol swantham veetil poyapolulla sukhamanu…nannayittundu Akhila
thanks Sukanya.. your words really mean a lot.
nalla kavitha….really nice akhila, short and sweet!
thanks Hari..is it a kavitha.. i donno.. but I know it is the pain of my heart..nostalgic heart..
akhila… hridayathinte vedana nalloru kavithayaayittu varumbo… that itself acts as a soothing balm and stems the pain!!!
🙂
ha ha..if i translate this , malayalee readers will definitely kick me out of the blogosphere because of my excellence in translating emotions..lol
Sumit, It is malayalam, my mother tongue..
ha ha thank you thank you
Wow.. Sugarcane 😀
no dear.. it’s bamboo
Opsie.. It appears to me like sugarcane 😀
thank you Sahodara..in fact this is from a techiworld.. there we have a bamboo tree near our building
yeah conspiracy of the universe..
So, I am not alone! I know certain things are ‘said better’ in the mother tongue. But try your best to translate… When I was editing a Tamil journal I carried translations of Pavithran theekkunni, Mukunthan to name a few. N D Rajkumar translated them, if I remember correct. This is what ‘sharing’ is all about Akhila. One John Smallshaw should be brought here while a Pavithran should be transferred to a poetry camp in
the banks of Thames.
yeah.. true.. i really appreciate your suggestion..let me see what best can be done
i donot know about this poem is all about , but believe if its from you its awesome
thank you..
hmm
നഷ്ടപ്പെട്ട ഇന്നലകൾ! ഇല്ലാതായ നന്മകൾ… അങ്ങനെ എന്തെല്ലാം …
hey.. absolutely.. you got it ..thanks manu
Hi Akila ur writings are great
oh.. really.. thank you.. but you complemented Akila.. who’s that..? 😉
I am quite sure u r a nice person…. The thoughts reveals the person…
oh my god.. such a blind complement..you know, i prefer critics rather than complements..;)
Great…. I went through ur about page
🙂 thank you
If u love to break ur anonymity… Tell me more about u
https://wordsandnotion.wordpress.com/2016/07/27/the-virtual-bond-we-share/
But found nothing….
enthu..?
About u as a person
ha ha.. still you complemented me..;)
On take it that is quite fine….!!
i prefer to be virtual..
https://wordsandnotion.wordpress.com/2016/07/27/the-virtual-bond-we-share/
U r views about things r realistic. U seems to long for the childhood, which we had (or had a little) and what the generations to come have lost for ever
yeah.. we entered into a busy life and rarely get such odd moments of silence in a busy life