The perfect Date

The gentle breeze giggled me as if I was in his arms

Two little silver liquid drops caressed my face

Enjoying the naughty wind teasing my curls

He loomed with two cups of coffee in his hands

Placing it on the balcony desk, hugged me from back

Closed my eyes, leaning upon his heart as always

Is this not the perfect date – two cups of coffee,

You and me, our balcony, the sneak hug and the rain?

I couldn’t resist bringing in this sweet definition here, from the magic of a special tea .

Such an expressive meaning, clinging to the real life. Kudos Josh…

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The author is a Quality Assurance professional by experience. Part Quantitative data analyst, part consultant for quality and information security practices, part software tester, she is a writer by passion and blogs at http://wordsandnotion.com and http://qualitynotion.com/.

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      Akhila

      September 22, 2016 at 10:03am

      thank you.. will definitely read your day dream

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    Akhila

    September 22, 2016 at 10:05am

    I am always behind such simple pleasures of life, as you defined in that perfect date.. so while i read it, i just felt it as reflection of my own mind.. and definitely the credit goes to you as the writer in you defined it in the best way..

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    • Josh

      September 22, 2016 at 10:18am

      Agree, Life when we observe it in milliseconds, filtering it down to that point, where we can hear those seconds tick! that’s where we can feel the beauty of life, its about celebrating simple things while we conquer and aim for ambitious dreams, life is beautiful, when we actually, talk, listen and appreciate, in those tables, am really sacred of these gadgets and apps which are enslaving our thoughts, to strangling our options to be human! **when i say that am not in whatsapps they gave me that look like am being transported from 17th century, am one though, feeling completely lost**

      (Ho entta ammo, sorry for such an emotionally driven comment)

      Thanks a lot, feels like recognized for my work 🙂

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        Akhila

        September 22, 2016 at 10:27am

        yaa,… i can read a lot from your comment….dont be bothered on the emotional part..
        pinne, enne angine valya pulliyonnumm akkenda, too…;)

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        • Josh

          September 22, 2016 at 10:32am

          You are **One Valya Sambavam** when i read your post related to Science&Technology my fuse goes off, i just read you and the fellow bloggers debating **with an awe (Jaws dropped)**

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          • Josh

            September 22, 2016 at 10:42am

            Valya alugal valya varthanam 🙂 Reading!

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          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 10:57am

            i do agree with u Josh, ente fuse pokaarundu sci post of Akhila vaayichittu (sorry Akhila don’t take it as a discouraging opinion), njan mikkavaarum oru 3 times enggilum vaayikkum. Appozha oru realization varunnathu, how little i know ennu 🙂

          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 11:00am

            🙂
            Josh, thallu kollaathe odenddi varumo :p

          • Josh

            September 22, 2016 at 11:02am

            Njan aah Jilla vittu oru manikoor munne 😀

          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 11:05am

            when we travel in ship, they give security classes, they say in case of emergency evacuation. We have to loudly say “Abandon Ship” and jump into sea with our life jacket on.
            Njanum appo “abandon ship…abandon ship” 😀

          • Josh

            September 22, 2016 at 11:06am

            He he!! But If your the Captain you can’t abandon the ship 🙂

          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 11:08am

            haha
            athu point appo pinne pani vaangghum :p

          • Josh

            September 22, 2016 at 11:09am

            He he…. most respectable scene and the captain * TITANIC*

          • Josh

            September 22, 2016 at 11:08am

            Wow! Ships always Fascinates me, you travel in it how great is that.. you a Marine ?

          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 11:10am

            I traveled very few since my PhD (marine science) work is more to coastal area…in future i might be a full time oceanography researcher 🙂

          • Josh

            September 22, 2016 at 11:11am

            Wow! Interesting all the best with your future endeavours! Great to meet you too from a different field of work and study 🙂

          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 11:12am

            thanks dear…best wishes to u too 🙂

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            Akhila

            September 22, 2016 at 11:26am

            ayyooo.. you tooo joining with him to tease me……

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            Akhila

            September 22, 2016 at 11:33am

            pinney, eppozhum ore pole ezhutharuthennu ente keyboard warned me.. what should i do..;)

          • Josh

            September 22, 2016 at 11:46am

            Keyboard mattiya mathi 😛

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            Akhila

            September 22, 2016 at 11:51am

            but now my hands are also tuned to .. iniyippo, hands um mattanam ennu parayalle..

          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 11:49am

            hahaha….keyboard inu Akhila’s brain effect kitti ennaa thonnunney 😀

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      • myheartbeats4ublog

        September 22, 2016 at 10:21am

        actually i liked it..especially since he had the presence of mind to keep the coffee mugs safely down before venturing to hug! spilled coffee would have marred the perfect occasion.
        also liked the ‘leaning on his heart’ part

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  2. parijat shukla

    September 22, 2016 at 10:12am

    You have written it very beautifully and i believe you frequently go on such dates :). What will those do who dont drink tea or coffee ? 🙂

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      Akhila

      September 22, 2016 at 10:16am

      shhhhh……….

      and a cup of hot water for who dont drink drink coffee or tea

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    Akhila

    September 22, 2016 at 10:15am

    thanks Shreya…yes, the best date…wish you to have it soon..;)

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      Akhila

      September 22, 2016 at 10:28am

      thank you vivek..have a good day and a perfect date

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  5. shreyans

    September 22, 2016 at 10:54am

    it really seems perfect..nicely written
    shreyans

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      Akhila

      September 22, 2016 at 11:42am

      thanks Shreyans..even though i was not much satisfied with the way i depicted it, your words soothes me

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  6. elaine

    September 22, 2016 at 10:58am

    Small things do make our life valuable and we mostly neglect to see how important they are and the people who create such happiness in our lifes 🙂

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    • Josh

      September 22, 2016 at 11:02am

      But in my case, Akhila saw my small effort and acknowledge it 🙂 **Akhila..no buttering okay, i mean it**

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        Akhila

        September 22, 2016 at 11:41am

        nothing to be added in asterisk..your words speak for you genuinely.. 🙂

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      Akhila

      September 22, 2016 at 11:31am

      you are right Elaine..just we need to have an eye to appreciate those little things while going behind big big dreams

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  7. Sonali@foodtravelandmakeup

    September 22, 2016 at 11:31am

    Lovely words…

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      Akhila

      September 22, 2016 at 11:36am

      thanks Sonali..really appreciating your words

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      Akhila

      September 22, 2016 at 11:58am

      i never thought that you are a mallu when we met first.. but, in this DP, no doubt about this kollam girl..

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      • elaine

        September 22, 2016 at 12:01pm

        hahaha…numma eppozhum varietyude aalaanu 😉 veettil poyaappo palliyil onnu poyekkaam ennu karuthi…ammayude saree kadameduthu :p athukondu little sis inte kayyum kaalum pidichu oru photom oppichu 😉 :p

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          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 12:16pm

            Josh ara manikkoor munpe scoot aayi ennu parayaan paranjju :p

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            Akhila

            September 22, 2016 at 12:21pm

            ha ha… pakarathinu aale ivide nirtheettalle poyathu…

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            Akhila

            September 22, 2016 at 12:25pm

            pinney..nammude childhood romance okke evide ethi..pinne kandillallo..

          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 12:26pm

            athuu ezhuthanam ennu undu half way written aanu next part, but idakku vere orupaadu threads varunna kaaranam time adjust cheyyaan pattiyillaa 🙁 athu ezhuthi complete cheyyanam…

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            Akhila

            September 22, 2016 at 12:29pm

            and also, post something on your ship experience.. variety is your haemoglobin right..

          • elaine

            September 22, 2016 at 12:32pm

            അയ്യോ ഞാൻ വാള് വച്ച് പട്ടിയായ കഥ നാട്ടുകാരെ അറിയിക്കണോ … കുറച്ചു എന്ധോക്കെയോ ആ സമയത്തു കുത്തികുറിച്ചിരുന്നു കാരണം ചുറ്റും ഉള്ളത് കടല് മാത്രമായിരുന്നു കൂട്ടിനു ഒരു seagull ഉം ആ കപ്പലിലെ ഏക പെൺകൊടി ഞാൻ ആയിരുന്നു ….

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          Akhila

          September 22, 2016 at 1:42pm

          oh..okay.. I remember you mentioning it earlier, on that escaped one post..

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          • Joker Shayar

            September 22, 2016 at 1:50pm

            honestly i don’t remember that :P.. but i remember you commenting on my ‘About section’ for my name’s reverse abbreviations :D..

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            Akhila

            September 22, 2016 at 2:34pm

            ya.. you are right.. in the about page…

  8. radhikasreflection

    September 22, 2016 at 2:32pm

    Who needs a candle light dinner to have a romantic time. Coffee with your loved one is also so special. Lovely !!

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    • Puneet

      September 22, 2016 at 5:10pm

      Ah.. That will remain alive in memories so yeah it can be called “is” also.

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    Akhila

    September 22, 2016 at 5:10pm

    ha ha…you are a coffee fan , right..for a punch, i changed it to coffee…

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    Akhila

    September 22, 2016 at 5:15pm

    ya.. sulaimani is a good option especially after a heavy meals..

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  14. Josh

    September 22, 2016 at 8:56pm

    Edo Aishu .. milk powder chaya Alla.. inj nalla paal chaya kudichikka ? Anyways coffee valya teams intte drink aan 😀 pinne suliamani lemon add cheytha inj e parayuna coffee intt katha kazhiyum :p

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  15. Josh

    September 22, 2016 at 8:58pm

    Chai people nu entha koyappam.. Chai chai zindabaad!

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  16. Josh

    September 22, 2016 at 9:00pm

    Ohh pinne oru parishkaari vannekanu :p

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  17. Wandering Soul

    September 22, 2016 at 10:36pm

    Loved this. What a beautiful, evocative, way of expressing simple but deep romance! I could actually picture it in my mind.

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      Akhila

      September 23, 2016 at 12:42pm

      really happy as you could feel it in your mind.. make it happen..;)

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    Akhila

    September 23, 2016 at 12:24pm

    shooo..enthoru samadhanam kozhikkodan slang l vayikkan…jai jai kozhikode…

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    • Josh

      September 23, 2016 at 12:47pm

      Appo inggakk Thalasseri slang kannedutha kandude 😛

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        Akhila

        September 23, 2016 at 1:18pm

        anakku kozhappilla..aishu paranjonam, orithu’…

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      • Josh

        September 23, 2016 at 1:05pm

        Veruthe oru kaaryam illand, vadi koduth adi medichu ** entte oru karyam **

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          Akhila

          September 23, 2016 at 1:12pm

          thalassery nnu bomb umayi varillenkil, we kozhikodians are ready to accept the neighbor people too…

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          • Josh

            September 23, 2016 at 1:14pm

            Oho ninga randalum Kozhikod hai hi ho howw!! arinjilla :/

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            Akhila

            September 23, 2016 at 1:26pm

            pakachupoyi ente balyam.. ennu koode cherkku..

          • Josh

            September 23, 2016 at 1:28pm

            enthooooo!! athe enne aaro vilikunnud.. nja pinee varame 😛

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          • Josh

            September 23, 2016 at 1:15pm

            Chumma!! njagal vishunu polum padakkam pottikarilla.. pediyaa …

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    Akhila

    September 23, 2016 at 12:27pm

    numma, evide poyalum, inganokke thanne.. athanne mallu specialty..

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    Akhila

    September 23, 2016 at 1:25pm

    fire and fierce words became blushing.. he he….and i recommend you to read the “magic of tea” which i mentioned in that post..

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    Akhila

    September 23, 2016 at 1:36pm

    oh.. so sweet words… it is not the beauty of my words, but, the beauty of that simple pleasure

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    • boundlessblessingsblog

      September 23, 2016 at 1:40pm

      But let me tell you Akhila the beauty that you put is amazing. I just want to tell u one more thing Akhila someone has nominated me but I don’t know how to go about it can u help me pl.

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    Akhila

    September 23, 2016 at 1:51pm

    more like this…ha, have you read my blog description…

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    • prashantt

      September 23, 2016 at 2:10pm

      Seriously!!!…Words & Notion isn’t it….so every genre of writing has some sort of notion & see how beautifully you came up with this.:)

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        Akhila

        September 23, 2016 at 2:15pm

        voh nahi…the description which we add..

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        • prashantt

          September 23, 2016 at 2:21pm

          Oho!! Thats a link right.. i missed to read…Chai biscuit,will come back to you after reading it.

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    Akhila

    September 24, 2016 at 1:06pm

    i am quite sure that your princess will find the most precious moments during then

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