കാര്‍മുകില്‍ വിരഹം

എന്നെപ്പുണരും കാര്‍മുകില്‍ വിരഹമൊരു

മഴയായെങ്കിലെന്നേറെ കൊതിച്ചു ഞാന്‍

പാതി കൂമ്പിയ മിഴികളേറെ പണിപ്പെട്ടു

തുറന്നിട്ടുമൊന്നും കാണാനില്ലാതുഴന്നു ഞാന്‍

ഇരുട്ടിനെ ഭേദിച്ചൊരു മിന്നല്പ്പിണരായെന്‍

പ്രാണന്‍ പുറത്തിറങ്ങിയെങ്കില്‍….

..രാവന്തിയോളം നിന്നെത്തേടിയലഞ്ഞൊരു

രാപ്പാടി പിന്നെയും നിശബ്ദമായ് പാടീ:

“നിന്‍റെ മാര്‍ഗ്ഗം പ്രണയമോ പ്രതികാരമോ,

എന്തിനെന്നെ നീ കൊല്ലാതെ കൊല്ലുന്നു”

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The author is a Quality Analyst by experience. Part Quantitative data analyst, part consultant for quality and information security practices, part software tester, she is a writer by passion and blogs at https://wordsandnotion.com and https://qualitynotion.com/.

One thought on “കാര്‍മുകില്‍ വിരഹം

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          Akhila

          September 30, 2016 at 10:47am

          is there a bat in your dp.. at the very first look, it appeared to be the face of a girl..

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          • Josh

            September 30, 2016 at 10:48am

            Haha! Yeah BatMan !! 😀

  1. boundlessblessingsblog

    September 30, 2016 at 11:12am

    GM, Akhila. This post looks like it is only for a few. How to understand this language so just look at the alphabets.

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      • myheartbeats4ublog

        September 30, 2016 at 12:02pm

        virtual/semi-virtual aayathu kaaranam ippo ‘fairy lady’ aanu.. real avumbo ‘fiery lady’ aavum

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    Akhila

    September 30, 2016 at 12:33pm

    Ya….shhhhh….try to learn malayalam

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    Akhila

    September 30, 2016 at 12:42pm

    So be ready with a pen and book…i will be back in a short while with a bamboo stick

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    • prashantt

      September 30, 2016 at 12:48pm

      Fiery lady back in action again,i mean threatening me before giving the classes.I will arrange book & pen but please come with coffee thats more popular of south instead bamboo stick ;p

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  4. Joker Shayar

    September 30, 2016 at 1:13pm

    “very nice embroidery” 😀

    that’s what i can say as i can’t read this language :p and i was looking for translation in comments lol

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      Akhila

      September 30, 2016 at 2:25pm

      rofl…such a sweet comment which i can have ever upon my mother tongue…

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    Akhila

    September 30, 2016 at 4:43pm

    yes dear.. language is not required to express love.. isnt it..

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    Akhila

    September 30, 2016 at 5:03pm

    ha ha.. thank you TM..
    A nightingale asks ” i donno whether your path is on love or revenge. why are you hurting me without killing me”

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  8. Mohammed Ihjas :)

    September 30, 2016 at 6:08pm

    I think your Malayalam posts have an edge over the English 🙂 Concise and enjoyable.

    Sometime it is difficult to understand Whether it is revenge or love.

    But always be positive separations help to grow the love deep inside the heart.

    Muhabbat bhi zarrori di, Bichadna bhi zarrori di 🙂

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    Akhila

    October 1, 2016 at 8:30am

    ha ha .. i know, you are laughing seeing the “embroidery”

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  10. skd

    October 1, 2016 at 5:19pm

    Sathyangalokke arinjeedumenkilum dukham varumbol karanju pokunnu….. But, this girl is good. A hi-fi to you akhila. However, i felt the kavitha is not over…. so…

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    • skd

      October 1, 2016 at 5:20pm

      add ‘Usually’ at the beginning of the above msg:)

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      Akhila

      October 2, 2016 at 11:16am

      Yes…you are right..it’s not over..can you fill up?

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      • skd

        October 2, 2016 at 9:25pm

        ayyo ….paniyaayi! athrakkokke veno;)

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          • skd

            October 2, 2016 at 9:28pm

            athu sari! avide undo! vidmaattain? 🙂

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            Akhila

            October 2, 2016 at 9:29pm

            ha ha…njan ippo pokam.. but you need to fill up

          • skd

            October 2, 2016 at 9:32pm

            njan aadyam paranjathu thiricheduthhoottaa…:)

          • skd

            October 2, 2016 at 9:34pm

            [please give me some time, don’t know when…but one day I will fill it up! ]

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            Akhila

            October 2, 2016 at 9:35pm

            take your own time…but remember the challenge is on..

          • skd

            October 2, 2016 at 9:38pm

            sammathichu…pettoo njan 🙂 [Noted this in my list!]
            btb, you i did sent a linkedin req to you. Did you get?

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          Akhila

          August 5, 2018 at 7:44pm

          You added meaningful insights to my lyrics…thanks a ton.. It was wonder for me to know you came up with that even after 2 years..without forgetting the same..

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          • skd

            August 5, 2018 at 7:58pm

            Thank you! Btb, that time i added few lines and kept in my notes. Saw that today and was in a mood to write after an interval… Also thought of suprise you! Happy that you liked it…

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