Scream of an unborn

I always imagined your shining eyes welcoming me to my new home. I thought there was deep love in your heart. I was eagerly waiting for that day to happen.

But all of a sudden, it occurred..

I saw something coming towards me. I haven’t seen such a thing ever in my life. I smiled at it. But it didn’t smile back. Instead it hugged me, hugged me so tightly that I couldn’t breathe at all. I couldn’t understand what was happening to me. The sharp objects crushed me completely.

Still I donno why did you deny my arrival in to your world? And finally why did you cut me into pieces? Can you ever guess the pain I felt? Physically as well as mentally you hurt me so badly.

Your right to make decisions deprived me of my right to life. You misunderstood that I feel nothing and understand nothing. You never heard me screaming while you killed me brutally. The pain will be back to haunt you if you ever know my scream.

About

The author is a Quality Assurance professional by experience. Part Quantitative data analyst, part consultant for quality and information security practices, part software tester, she is a writer by passion and blogs at http://wordsandnotion.com and http://qualitynotion.com/.

One thought on “Scream of an unborn

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      Akhila

      November 19, 2016 at 1:47pm

      Thanks Radhi…But a bitter fact in the world..

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  1. vishal4u

    November 19, 2016 at 9:18am

    OMG that is just so brutal, could hardly complete reading it.
    What a disgraceful act by humans.

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      Akhila

      November 19, 2016 at 1:46pm

      ya..it is damn brutal…..millions and millions of abortions are happening in a year in the world.. who cares about the scream of those unborns…

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      Akhila

      November 19, 2016 at 1:44pm

      recently read a news , the court allowing an unmarried mother to abort her unborn , considering her mental conditions. I think it happened when the fetus was 20 weeks or more. As per science the baby can really really feel the pain if it is 20 weeks old..so sad, no..

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      • Varsh

        November 19, 2016 at 4:37pm

        It is a sad thing to do, but in cases like this one don’t you think it is better than bringing a life in this big bad world and having no one to tend to it?

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          Akhila

          November 20, 2016 at 12:57pm

          frankly speaking i donno…but why the innocent child.. that’s what painful..

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  2. Manu Michael sdb

    November 19, 2016 at 12:29pm

    I always wonder how can a loving mother could allow her body to be place of such brutality…

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      Akhila

      November 19, 2016 at 1:39pm

      hmm.. still it happens in this world knowingly or unknowingly..

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    Akhila

    November 19, 2016 at 2:03pm

    thanks Harsh…normally while saying thanks, we should be happy.. but this time, I am not at all happy as these kinds of brutal murders haunt me so badly

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    • Fab Writings

      November 19, 2016 at 2:04pm

      Yes Di, whenever I hear such cases, i think like “who gave them the right to snatch someone’s right to life”

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        Akhila

        November 19, 2016 at 2:09pm

        true that..even if the fetus can feel the pain or not, no one has that right to snatch their lives..

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      Akhila

      November 20, 2016 at 12:28pm

      ya…it’s a painful thing happening millions of times in the world in a year.

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  4. tingleurtastebuds

    November 19, 2016 at 10:16pm

    Yeah true the pain is so true and untold. People just do it just for their selfish reasons. Too brutal. Wish all hospitals just say no to this. Many don’t get a baby and there are ppl who are just doing this. Sad though.
    Meena

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      Akhila

      November 20, 2016 at 12:27pm

      yes, meena its pathetic whatever may be the underlying reasons..

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  5. novelistbaba

    November 19, 2016 at 10:37pm

    powerful…………i agree with you………..this is cruel and inhumane……….people need to be careful……its not their choice alone. 🙂 🙂
    and going by the time of me reading this……i am definitely going to have nightmares……

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      • novelistbaba

        November 20, 2016 at 1:16pm

        Still couldn’t think beyond myself……….i need some help………a lot of us do….

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          Akhila

          November 20, 2016 at 1:35pm

          ya.. people do this, support the abortion .. reasons could be many, and justifiable in their words…but why the unborn suffer..?

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          • novelistbaba

            November 20, 2016 at 1:44pm

            True…….and i will be honest…….i am not going to bear a child in this life……so i will never have a personal insight in this matter…….and i do not have a clear resolve in this……..i do think that there should be some freedom for a woman to be able to chose……..but gender discrimination is wrong and nothing can justify that……again i do not know what i am talking about……..

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      Akhila

      November 20, 2016 at 12:19pm

      yes it is..but unfortunately it cannt be banned or wont be banned completely.

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          Akhila

          November 20, 2016 at 12:25pm

          hmm… can argue it as a boon or bane even in case of a rape..why the innocent child should suffer..

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          • atrangizindagieksafar

            November 20, 2016 at 1:22pm

            that’s entirely a person’s own prerogative dear… cant argue there. it was just a thought. whether they want to live with the living memory of a heinous crime or terminate it… its a persons own choice… cant dictate terms here. one has to raped first to be a judge on that

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          • atrangizindagieksafar

            November 20, 2016 at 1:29pm

            Yes but I’m against girls getting carelessly into a physical relationship and then going in for an abortion…. if you have to get physical… fine. But be careful.

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            Akhila

            November 20, 2016 at 1:34pm

            hmm…it is a world where there is no boundaries for lust…it’s shameful

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    Akhila

    November 20, 2016 at 12:56pm

    thanks vivek..ya.. when love/lust and responsibilities are not in sync, the things appear inhumane..

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    Akhila

    November 20, 2016 at 12:58pm

    thanks Prashant..
    let the eyes be opened towards this bitter fact..

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  9. Shaggy

    November 20, 2016 at 1:16pm

    71 likes in 23 minutes….. Woah!!! Blogging goals….

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      Akhila

      November 20, 2016 at 1:36pm

      ha ha..nope yar.. it was a repost.. so might be 23 + hours..

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      • Shaggy

        November 20, 2016 at 8:34pm

        Besides you are blogging since 1885 so…. We can actually expect these kind of achievements

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  10. Shaggy

    November 20, 2016 at 1:18pm

    Btw the thing you wrote is so accurate that it hurts….. Damn The society….

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      Akhila

      November 20, 2016 at 1:30pm

      hmm..atleast 50 % f such murders could have been prevented if the people can hear those silent screams..

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      • Shaggy

        November 20, 2016 at 1:31pm

        If only….
        I always wondered what goes through the mother while killing her baby

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  11. unsaid words

    November 20, 2016 at 1:27pm

    This is painful ,well if doesn’t want the baby .They should look for the means which can prevent this.

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      Akhila

      November 20, 2016 at 1:28pm

      yes.. but when lust overrules the humanity, the evilness come into picture..

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  12. Bikramjit

    November 20, 2016 at 2:16pm

    I am with you 100% but won’t it be worse for the child to be born and not cared for.. what about those screams that come ..

    It is a very difficult to see what is right or wrong. But nevertheless it is sad very sad…

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      Akhila

      November 21, 2016 at 11:20am

      yes, bikram..good or bad, right or wrong, boon or bane.. everything based on perspectives…. still how can we have shut our ears towards the scream of an unborn

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      Akhila

      November 21, 2016 at 11:16am

      thanks mvs.. hmm.. sensitive.. i know i might have hurt someone

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  13. sinisterdarksoul

    November 20, 2016 at 9:27pm

    That packed one hell of a wallop! Also amazingly honest! I was almost left speechless. 😮

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      Akhila

      November 21, 2016 at 10:55am

      let us spread the awareness..and wish for less silent screams in future..

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      Akhila

      November 21, 2016 at 10:53am

      yesss… let them hear that silent scream

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  14. Becky Bee

    November 20, 2016 at 11:44pm

    I’m sorry. I can’t agree with this post… Your choices and feelings regarding abortion are your own, but imagine reading something like this if you have ever had an abortion or miscarried… it doesn’t bear thinking about.

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      Akhila

      November 21, 2016 at 10:53am

      yes.. it’s my opinion. i cant bear people suffering even if it is an unborn..
      but of course i can understand the perspective you are referring to.

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      • Becky Bee

        November 21, 2016 at 3:06pm

        I understand it’s your opinion 🙂 & no harm meant by sharing mine.

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  15. undiscoveredgirl13

    November 21, 2016 at 10:54am

    Tbh its hard reading something like that when you have miscarried because its makes us think back to what we have been trying to heal from but know that we probably never will .

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    Akhila

    November 21, 2016 at 11:09am

    thanks Ashik…i know i must have hurt some girls emotions.. but i couldnt resist posting this..

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    Akhila

    November 21, 2016 at 11:15am

    yes mann… it’s a sin whatever maybe the causes

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  18. Meenakshi Sethi

    November 21, 2016 at 11:29am

    I’m having goose bumps while reading it…A very powerful message that no one has right to violate the right of a new life to enter this world!!

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      Akhila

      November 21, 2016 at 12:04pm

      thanks meenakshi…hope the message is spread in the right way..

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      • Meenakshi Sethi

        November 21, 2016 at 12:08pm

        Absolutely correct message and I agree with you! Decision of bringing or not bringing a child should be taken before conceiving.

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          • Josh

            November 21, 2016 at 1:22pm

            May be this piece of writing inspired from people you might know ( If not well and good ) having said that.. Scream of an unborn.. keep this on record, something similar might release in youtube soon with a different perspective. I will update!

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            Akhila

            November 21, 2016 at 1:26pm

            inspired from a recent news read..court allowed a girl to abort her baby after a rape..might be for her good.. but the unborn scream behind that news haunted me a lot..
            waiting for your video..

  19. thewritewomanblog

    November 21, 2016 at 4:49pm

    This piece tore at my heart, Akhila! You have brought out a topic that is more suppressed than spoken about.

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