I esteem the energy while I am with you

It’s not the passion in his eyes that she loves

It’s not the boldness in his bones that she likes

It’s not the brainy words that catch her at once

It’s not the charisma in his voice that allures her

But it’s his confident vibes that cheer her up

His liveliness passes in her nerves, fuels her n

Inspires her existence every now and then.

She esteems the energy while being with him.

About

The author is a Quality Analyst by experience. Part Quantitative data analyst, part consultant for quality and information security practices, part software tester, she is a writer by passion and blogs at https://wordsandnotion.com and https://qualitynotion.com/.

One thought on “I esteem the energy while I am with you

  1. Josh

    November 24, 2016 at 9:27am

    Rom Akki Back! Bravo 🙂 Happy Morning!

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  2. Gastradamus

    November 24, 2016 at 10:11am

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  3. A

    November 24, 2016 at 10:41am

    Renewable or non renewable ??

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      Akhila

      November 24, 2016 at 12:38pm

      as long as the trust is there, it is renewable..

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  4. theonlysup

    November 24, 2016 at 11:07am

    its good the a person spreads positive vibes and women loves it. but the reason why such positivity is around him are the ones you mentioned above(passion,boldness,intellect.charisma or the x factor)

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      Akhila

      November 24, 2016 at 12:40pm

      may be you are right..that’s the beauty of love

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  5. A

    November 24, 2016 at 12:52pm

    Ancestry problem I don’t think so.. individual problem might be

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    Akhila

    November 24, 2016 at 1:02pm

    “the good daughter “….. arum kelkkenda..

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    Akhila

    November 24, 2016 at 1:19pm

    nee innu nalla form l anallo…ellarem kuzhappikkaniringiyirikkayanoda…

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  11. batrah

    November 24, 2016 at 1:29pm

    U have written this from the bottom of ur heart

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    Akhila

    November 24, 2016 at 1:30pm

    So ash. malayalam thanne mathi…let us see if his walls are cracked..

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    • A

      November 24, 2016 at 1:34pm

      Strong walls I guess been banging for months now ever since I met her on WP.. still holding on

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  13. kiranmag

    November 24, 2016 at 3:53pm

    Loved it especially the last 4 lines creating a deep impact

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      Akhila

      November 24, 2016 at 10:24pm

      thanks Kiran.. yes, those four lines are heart of the poem

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  14. novelistbaba

    November 24, 2016 at 4:30pm

    WoW!!! beautiful…………simple, honest and heartfelt……..loved this!!! 🙂 🙂

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      Akhila

      November 24, 2016 at 10:22pm

      thanks dear…yes, sometimes my crazy pen appears to be romantic..

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  15. doodlessworld

    November 24, 2016 at 5:45pm

    That Is really very beautiful
    and after reading it the only question ihave is
    written for whom? :p

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      Akhila

      November 25, 2016 at 10:33am

      glad that your attention came in..have a great time

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  18. mywords331

    November 25, 2016 at 7:22am

    Love is lovely and you make it more meaningful in your words..!

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  19. Rasakama

    November 25, 2016 at 8:02am

    Beautiful, powerful and heartfelt. Wow ! I really enjoyed reading. How would I explain… It’s like fuel to my brain. Thanks Akhila !

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      Akhila

      November 25, 2016 at 10:19am

      happy with your words…hope your brain is still okay with my fuel..;)

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