Flying cage of honey

My curtains blowing on a windy day

Rising up like a flying cage of honey

Sniffing and snuffling in between

Climbing on the walls to feel the crown

With my eyes closed, ears wide open,

I just sauntered into that flying cage

Now I can see and hear you whistling

You are humming for me and me alone,

While your hands are holding me sweetly

And making me feel your warm touch.

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The author is a Quality Assurance professional by experience. Part Quantitative data analyst, part consultant for quality and information security practices, part software tester, she is a writer by passion and blogs at http://wordsandnotion.com and http://qualitynotion.com/.

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One thought on “Flying cage of honey

  1. boundlessblessingsblog

    February 16, 2017 at 11:54am

    Oh so sweet and beautiful Akhila, flying higher and higher and so nice all honey dripping out of the cage. Great.

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    Akhila

    February 16, 2017 at 1:09pm

    Yes..it was very very sweet to taste that strong wind

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    Akhila

    February 16, 2017 at 2:04pm

    are baba.. so you were not reading me so long.. phewwww….

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  4. Sangbad

    February 16, 2017 at 2:51pm

    I want to flatter while commenting but I can’t because the poem is so good and full of love…imitative words can spoil the comment…

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      Akhila

      February 16, 2017 at 4:17pm

      Thanks a lot for your kind words.. But frankly, i am not satisfied with that poem..as if i didn’t pay full credits to the wind i experienced yesterday in my home

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      • Sangbad

        February 16, 2017 at 4:22pm

        Is it call coincidence…s’how I also felt that after reading the last line…I thought you had written like that to give the poem a beautiful romantic charm as well as turn…

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    Akhila

    February 16, 2017 at 7:38pm

    Now i have a wind chime also there in between the curtains

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    Akhila

    February 16, 2017 at 8:11pm

    Thanks vishal.. Yes it was very lovely to watch my curtains blowing in that wind

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    • vishal4u

      February 16, 2017 at 8:17pm

      Yup curtain dancing on a rhythm of winds has surely mesmerized you and this lovely poem of yours.

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  7. bisimodupe1975

    February 16, 2017 at 8:24pm

    Beautifully written…. Love how you crafty took us through thus quiet moment between two lovers

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    Akhila

    February 21, 2017 at 7:41pm

    Thanks meenakshi.. the wind was so sweet that nothing else could be a better word for that feel…

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