I promised her soul

She came to me; her cold hands touched my shoulders. It was a reminder of my words.

When I woke up there was no one else other than her image hanging on my walls of mind.

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The author is a Quality Assurance professional by experience. Part Quantitative data analyst, part consultant for quality and information security practices, part software tester, she is a writer by passion and blogs at http://wordsandnotion.com and http://qualitynotion.com/.

One thought on “I promised her soul

  1. mihrank

    March 23, 2017 at 9:20am

    wow – this is deep words with excellent feelings…

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  3. Malini

    March 23, 2017 at 10:26am

    Intense words in two lines. Beautiful 🙂

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      Akhila

      March 23, 2017 at 10:33am

      Thanks Malini.. ya, there is some intense emotions behind the words..

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    Akhila

    March 23, 2017 at 10:30am

    Oh.. but what I wrote was not a fiction..and whatever I wrote so far were neither fictitious..
    I really love you people writing tiny tales in a few words and convey the essence..it’s really an art..

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    Akhila

    March 23, 2017 at 10:52am

    It’s a Win-win..
    between did you post that one killing both

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        Akhila

        March 23, 2017 at 11:03am

        Happy or sad endings.. both will fit in to your words perfectly

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  6. Gastradamus

    March 23, 2017 at 11:00am

    Continue to enlighten your soul and good things shall come.

    Gastradamus is booming, please come on by and share your thoughts sista

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  7. kalyansparks

    March 23, 2017 at 11:12am

    Who is she???? Why you experience these kind of things frequently..I think someday even you will talk to me using me telepathy…

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    Akhila

    March 23, 2017 at 11:13am

    Between may I ask, how you people come up with such fictions…some wild imaginations or something somewhere happened..

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    • Jeni G.J

      March 23, 2017 at 11:17am

      You got it right.wild imaginations most of the times and sometimes it’s happened somewhere. Btw you can ask others too

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    • Jeni G.J

      March 23, 2017 at 4:06pm

      I’m really sorry for what I commented lately. I didn’t know it was real. Take care akhila. Much love

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        Akhila

        March 23, 2017 at 7:19pm

        Oh dear jeni.. I know you were just kidding and that’s why i replied in the same lines too..so don’t worry at all..

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  12. boundlessblessingsblog

    March 23, 2017 at 12:26pm

    So eerie to see a reflection on the wall and you finally killed her. So now at peace. Superb words Akhila.

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  13. kalyansparks

    March 23, 2017 at 2:25pm

    I don’t think souls revolve around us.Though they revolve they don’t have Human emotions,because they are liberated from body.soo that particular”she” maybe mother ,Friend,sister or even a baby.Soul resting in peace is western notion.According to Indian theory,it already have wore a new body.

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      Akhila

      March 23, 2017 at 11:25pm

      Aha.. What all things are there in your master brain…even you differentiated the souls between west and east

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    Akhila

    March 23, 2017 at 3:37pm

    Maybe hallucinations..but I have a promise to keep…

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  15. crazygenesblog

    March 23, 2017 at 3:55pm

    That was very beautiful Akhila , you told a story in a few words . To everyone it means something different . I am in awe of you !

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      Akhila

      March 24, 2017 at 9:47pm

      Ya,you are right..it’s something very deep and so I just put some paint and powder to hide the intense emotions behind the same…

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  18. thewritewomanblog

    March 26, 2017 at 1:35pm

    Oh! That feeling grips your heart causing a strange and unpleasant ache, one that you simply cannot define. Poor guy, hopes they are together soon.

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