Stand together and eradicate injustice – Part 1

I am fed up.. I cannot wait here anymore

I need to go home. Oh it started raining too. How come I miss my umbrella? Or did I forget it somewhere? I think i have kept in the juice shop.

Should I go back and collect my umbrella or hire a taxi and go home?

Or should I wait a few more minutes? But it is going to heavily rain soon. Seems I have got a roof of clouds which are just about to collapse. Better to find some shelter before the droplets hit me on.

While walking towards a nearby shop, I found something strange on the other side of street, on my left side. There was a ten year old girl surrounded by a few people. The girl was carrying something in her hand, something like a big white carry bag. It was not much clear for me as she was on the other side of street.

Oh, she is distributing some packets to the people around her. And they are keeping it to their chest and praying for a moment.

My phone is ringing, the same ring tone for which I was waiting for long. My heart started to jingle. Yes, I heard the voice which I wanted to hear on the other side of my phone. I was asked to look right. Oh, it’s him. He is coming towards me. How bad it would have been if I had left without waiting for him. I would have missed him forever if I had gone.

He is just a few feet away from me. My eyes could feel only his presence, nothing around me.

Oh, what’s that happening..why is he falling down? Did someone shoot him? But I didnt hear any voice..Or any heart attack..? Oh God, is this what you wanted..?

To be continued.. stay tuned

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One thought on “Stand together and eradicate injustice – Part 1

  1. Ravi S

    April 1, 2018 at 4:00pm

    Not bad Story teller. Building the suspense….loved it

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      Akhila

      April 1, 2018 at 10:19pm

      Thanks a lot …. probably my first attempt in these lines

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      Akhila

      April 1, 2018 at 10:19pm

      Thanks Ravi.. I have found that and rectified

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      • thewritewomanblog

        April 6, 2018 at 11:29pm

        Not at all, a little more explanation would have been amazing….it is still not late to do so..since it has such a strong message.

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