Something in heart, pulling n
Pushing the smashed nerves
Listen, listen to the lub-dub
Is it missing the sync of honey?
“Oh dear! Let me resonate you”
Whose voice, perplexed for a while
Unspoken and out of the thoughts.
And pretended to be unaware
Unaware of the missing harmony
And at once hid the pull n push
Under a smiley smiley face forever
And concealed the worries unnoticed.
Very compact yet cute 🙂
Thank you..
My pleasure 🙂
I love the picture.
Oh and the words too, but the picture made me smile. Thank you
Happy that my fingers made you smile..
Thank you
They did
Beautiful ♥
Thank you…
“And concealed the worries unnoticed”–nice last line. I also like how the words in the poem sort of popped with sound. 🙂 Very good writing.~Lindsey
Thank you so much for your kind words.
It’s so beautiful and cute!
Thanks for sharing, Akhila 🙂
Love and light <3
Anand 🙂
Thank you so much. Happy that you enjoyed it…….
It’s my pleasure, Akhila 🙂
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Short, precise and perfect…liked it… 🙂
I am glad that you liked it…
Beautifully penned… 🙂
Thank you so much. I am glad that you enjoyed it..:)
Beautiful….
Tons of Thanks..:)
Lovely piece and nice rhythm Akhila.
hmmm..nice poem and an excellent pic!”the smile that conceals worries”!!!
thanks and how could the picture be not excellent when it is my own fingers..;)
aayyo.. didnt know that
ha ha.. iniyippo comment matti parayanokkuulla..
hmmmm.. athum pattillallo!! picture ok aa ketto!!