How crazy I’m for you

By | January 6, 2016

 

Why are you failing to read my silence?

Why don’t you know how crazy I’m for you?

Why don’t you feel that possessiveness upon me?

 

I become weak when you avoid me

I become mad and sad when my love is denied

I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.

 

Is it my fault to place myself in you?

Is it my possessiveness which enigmas me?

Is it my failure to let you know my unspoken love?

 

I can’t withstand this anymore

I can’t ever be myself without you in me

I can’t ever live without that craziness in me.

 

love

 

109 thoughts on “How crazy I’m for you

  1. jncthedc

    Powerfully written with strong emotions. These sentiments are real and experienced by so many people. Sharing your poem will likely help people take emotions and translate them into actions. Well done.

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    1. Akhila Post author

      Thank you so much.. You are really inspiring me to write more..:) thanks again

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    1. Akhila Post author

      oh.. Yea.. You identified it, Visakha.. flowers in the garden at my home 🙂

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        1. Akhila Post author

          oh.. really.. I like them a lot.. easily maintainable too.. where are you living..?

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    1. Akhila Post author

      Thanks Jason.. Yeah.. Having a great new year.. 😉
      Wish you too a wonderful new year..

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  2. thecucumbercity

    Nice one, loved the verse “I become broken and ruined when you don’t feel me.”

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    1. Akhila Post author

      really… 🙂 thank you so much. I ma happy that you liked it.. Have a great time..

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  3. ANM7

    Good work, very meaningful. I get what you are saying. Investing your self into the life of another, yet no commitment has been established, and no true ritual of communication.

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  4. Jodine

    Is it meant to be ‘I’m’ or ‘I am’? Just wondering as I found this a distraction that took me away from your poem. I too have been crazy in love 🙂 Jx

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      1. Jodine

        Yes that looks and reads better but it’s your poem so it can be whatever you want it to be. Jx

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    1. Akhila Post author

      oh.. I am so glad that you found it beautiful.. thanks a lot friend.. have a good day!!

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  7. aishahnaaz

    Your writings are always deep! 🙂 and that flower, we call it thechi.
    Did I just find a malayalee?? 😀 I’m new around here and you’re the first malayalee on my list!

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    1. Akhila Post author

      Oh..really. so I am that lucky gal to be first on your malayalee bloggers list. Are u living in Kerala

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    1. Akhila Post author

      Thanks a lot for thinking about me.
      But recently I made my blog an award free one. So I hope you will excuse me if I don’t participate in this..once again thank you so much for your consideration

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    1. Akhila Post author

      Thank you so much. I am very glad with your words. When heart speaks, naturally it becomes romantic..:)

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      1. K. Bellamy with a Purpose

        Feeling more love than ever before. But, I can express my love openly and freely so I don’t feel as tired. Although, I am aiming at expressing my love even more openly, and freely in the physical.

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