Excuse me N look at me

By | February 16, 2016


Excuse me and look at me

You can see yourself in my eyes

You can’t be you without me in you

You know that much better

You know that I know the same

You are playing to be unaware

We are one, one for endless time

Bonded by God, blessed with selfless love

No matter what occurs in our days

Our hearts will beat as one forever

45 thoughts on “Excuse me N look at me

  1. Amrita

    Very well said Akhila! We’re one connected by an invisible thread:-)

    1. Akhila Post author

      Hi Sumit, happy to read your comment..thanks a lot.. i am here only.. reading and commenting..but writing was limited to my diary alone.. now it came out.;)

      1. SumitOfficial

        Yay! I just read your this poem also. It is superb. Please share your thoughts, it is always good to read your posts. 🙂

        1. Akhila Post author

          I am so happy that you liked it.. so are you still in search of your valentine 😉

  2. ANM7

    This brought to mind something I had been thinking about the other day, about how we leave pieces, impressions of self with everyone we come in contact with. Co workers, teachers, friends, school mates, not just the folk we are intimate with such as relatives. Even those fleeting moments, over a store counter, saying pardon me to someone we just bumped into. Data, we wind up being data which God can use subconsciously in other human machines.


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