ശിലയും ശില്പ്പവും

By | August 15, 2016
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ഒരു വാക്കിലുമുരുകാത്ത

ശിലയാവാനാശിച്ചു ഞാന്‍

ഒരു നോക്കിലുമലിയാത്ത

ശില്പ്പമാവാനോര്‍ത്തു ഞാന്‍.

ഓരോ ശിലയിലുമാത്മാവു കണ്ട

നാളൊരു ശില്പ്പിയായി ഞാന്‍.

ശിലയാവാന്‍ കൊതിച്ചു ഞാന്‍

ശില്പ്പമാവാന്‍ കൊതിച്ചു ഞാന്‍

ശിലയില്‍ ശില്പ്പം പണിയുമൊരു

കല്‍മണ്ഡപത്തിന്‍ ശില്പ്പിയായി ഞാന്‍.

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  4. pins & ashes

    the rest of india wants a translations, and a few Malayalees like me too.. too lazy to read Mal in the morning!

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    1. Akhila Post author

      i am leaving the translation to malayalee readers..the lazy you too included..

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      2. pins & ashes

        (A literal translation)

        I wanted to be like that stone that does not melt under words …
        I wanted to be that sculpture that does not melt under a gaze ..

        I became that sculptor who saw a soul in every stone (I carved)

        I dreamt of becoming a stone
        I dreamt of becoming a sculpture
        However, I ended up being a scultpor who created sculptures out of stones

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  6. Jackie Jain

    Happy Independence day Akhila. But I am unable to understand the language. Even though I know Telugu, I find no link in between these two languages.

    Have a great week ahead. 🙂

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    1. Akhila Post author

      Thanks Jackie..happy independence to you too..
      this is malayalam, my mother tongue..

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  10. Akhila Post author

    oh.. sumit.. after a long gap, you are back and asking me to translate..
    okay, i will translate the entire stuff like this ‘ man proposes, god disposes’

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        1. Akhila Post author

          ha ha..njan kai vechalum bhangiyillenna ash parayunnathu.. athondu, i stopped translating.. see her translation..

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  16. Akhila Post author

    hmm..literal translation wont do justice to the underlying emotions.. that’s why i stopped translating.. now you understood why i didnt take that chance..

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    1. pins & ashes

      haha! it does give the essence… ! let’s see. somebody else can work on this and do another one. it will be fun reading the different versions..

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  18. pins & ashes

    I wanted to be

    A stone with a soul
    A sculpture with a heart

    And I became the sculptor …
    The sculptor who carved out soulful sculptures from soulful stones

    I became the sculptor who breathed life into stone

    (The picture and the post has changes in the shilpi part alle)

    I sleepy.. Me off! Chumma oru rasam

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      1. pins & ashes

        this is not a literal translation, therefore.. ! baaki after I wake up, hope somebody else comes by and does a better job of translating it.. literal or otherwise.. gn

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    1. pins & ashes

      Vicky are you game ..let’s wait. Where is the mistake which line..now I fins the spelling of sculptor is missing a t in a line somewhere

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      1. vicky

        I never wanted to be a stone,
        a stone that melts for
        the magical spells of love,
        I wanted to be the
        Koh -i- Noor
        the queen of diamonds.

        I wanted to be a sculpture
        that withstands the gaze
        of the most charming eyes,
        I wanted to be the
        David of Michael Angelo.

        I wanted to be a painting
        that stays mysterious
        for centuries,
        I wanted to be the
        Mona Lisa of Leonardo.

        I wanted to be a diamond
        I wanted to be a sculpture,
        I wanted to be a painting,
        I wanted to be a masterpiece.

        In the end..
        with all those dreams in the heart
        life made me a sculptor,
        a sculptor who gives life to the stones I carve

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        1. Akhila Post author

          this is a totally different version, but still ensuring the essence completely..thumbs for your romantic touch…
          why don’t you post it..?

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  34. G.Radhakrishnan Poonthura

    ഒരു യഥാർത്ഥ ശില്പിക്കു മാത്രമേ ഇത്തരം കാവ്യ ശില്പങ്ങൾ കൊത്താൻ കഴിയൂ ! മനോഹരം.

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