The gentle breeze giggled me as if I was in his arms
Two little silver liquid drops caressed my face
Enjoying the naughty wind teasing my curls
He loomed with two cups of coffee in his hands
Placing it on the balcony desk, hugged me from back
Closed my eyes, leaning upon his heart as always
Is this not the perfect date – two cups of coffee,
You and me, our balcony, the sneak hug and the rain?
I couldn’t resist bringing in this sweet definition here, from the magic of a special tea .
Such an expressive meaning, clinging to the real life. Kudos Josh…
Perfection. Hugging my lady that way is dream I want to come true.
why it’s a dream.. make it happen…
Yea right. I already tried.
I really love it.
https://relateyourlife.wordpress.com/2016/09/10/the-day-dream/
Please read, like and comment!
thank you.. will definitely read your day dream
It’s a perfect date!
thanks Sakthi…have a great day
You too!
I am always behind such simple pleasures of life, as you defined in that perfect date.. so while i read it, i just felt it as reflection of my own mind.. and definitely the credit goes to you as the writer in you defined it in the best way..
Agree, Life when we observe it in milliseconds, filtering it down to that point, where we can hear those seconds tick! that’s where we can feel the beauty of life, its about celebrating simple things while we conquer and aim for ambitious dreams, life is beautiful, when we actually, talk, listen and appreciate, in those tables, am really sacred of these gadgets and apps which are enslaving our thoughts, to strangling our options to be human! **when i say that am not in whatsapps they gave me that look like am being transported from 17th century, am one though, feeling completely lost**
(Ho entta ammo, sorry for such an emotionally driven comment)
Thanks a lot, feels like recognized for my work 🙂
yaa,… i can read a lot from your comment….dont be bothered on the emotional part..
pinne, enne angine valya pulliyonnumm akkenda, too…;)
You are **One Valya Sambavam** when i read your post related to Science&Technology my fuse goes off, i just read you and the fellow bloggers debating **with an awe (Jaws dropped)**
venda venda… https://wordsandnotion.wordpress.com/2016/04/03/looking-for-a-critic-comment/
Haha!! 😀
vayicho..??
Valya alugal valya varthanam 🙂 Reading!
shoo….i’m leaving…
Haha 😀
i do agree with u Josh, ente fuse pokaarundu sci post of Akhila vaayichittu (sorry Akhila don’t take it as a discouraging opinion), njan mikkavaarum oru 3 times enggilum vaayikkum. Appozha oru realization varunnathu, how little i know ennu 🙂
He he Satyam 🙂
🙂
Josh, thallu kollaathe odenddi varumo :p
Njan aah Jilla vittu oru manikoor munne 😀
when we travel in ship, they give security classes, they say in case of emergency evacuation. We have to loudly say “Abandon Ship” and jump into sea with our life jacket on.
Njanum appo “abandon ship…abandon ship” 😀
He he!! But If your the Captain you can’t abandon the ship 🙂
haha
athu point appo pinne pani vaangghum :p
He he…. most respectable scene and the captain * TITANIC*
Wow! Ships always Fascinates me, you travel in it how great is that.. you a Marine ?
I traveled very few since my PhD (marine science) work is more to coastal area…in future i might be a full time oceanography researcher 🙂
Wow! Interesting all the best with your future endeavours! Great to meet you too from a different field of work and study 🙂
thanks dear…best wishes to u too 🙂
Thank you Elaine!
🙂
grrrrrrrrrr
ayyooo.. you tooo joining with him to tease me……
🙂
pinney, eppozhum ore pole ezhutharuthennu ente keyboard warned me.. what should i do..;)
Keyboard mattiya mathi 😛
but now my hands are also tuned to .. iniyippo, hands um mattanam ennu parayalle..
🙂
hahaha….keyboard inu Akhila’s brain effect kitti ennaa thonnunney 😀
hmmmmm…perfect, ma’am akhila
yayy.. thank you.. thank you
pleasure, perfect pleasure
no ‘but’ this time…;)
actually i liked it..especially since he had the presence of mind to keep the coffee mugs safely down before venturing to hug! spilled coffee would have marred the perfect occasion.
also liked the ‘leaning on his heart’ part
ha ha…your observation…
You have written it very beautifully and i believe you frequently go on such dates :). What will those do who dont drink tea or coffee ? 🙂
shhhhh……….
and a cup of hot water for who dont drink drink coffee or tea
two times you mention drinks !! what was on on your mind ? 🙂
ha ha…whatever you wish to drink…
thanks Shreya…yes, the best date…wish you to have it soon..;)
hehe nope.
dont wanna fall in this trap. 😛
oh.. no.. i am quite sure, one day you will let me know that you are trapped..;)
hahaha
I think you are right. 😛 <3
see, there is a secret mush going on, even though unsaid…
ahaan.. No
Wao!!
thank you vivek..have a good day and a perfect date
thank you..:)
it really seems perfect..nicely written
shreyans
thanks Shreyans..even though i was not much satisfied with the way i depicted it, your words soothes me
that is why it was perfect..
Small things do make our life valuable and we mostly neglect to see how important they are and the people who create such happiness in our lifes 🙂
But in my case, Akhila saw my small effort and acknowledge it 🙂 **Akhila..no buttering okay, i mean it**
🙂
nothing to be added in asterisk..your words speak for you genuinely.. 🙂
you are right Elaine..just we need to have an eye to appreciate those little things while going behind big big dreams
🙂
Blisssssss. ..
Dream come true for sure….
he he…thank you.. thank you…
Lovely words…
thanks Sonali..really appreciating your words
🙂
i never thought that you are a mallu when we met first.. but, in this DP, no doubt about this kollam girl..
hahaha…numma eppozhum varietyude aalaanu 😉 veettil poyaappo palliyil onnu poyekkaam ennu karuthi…ammayude saree kadameduthu :p athukondu little sis inte kayyum kaalum pidichu oru photom oppichu 😉 :p
ha ha.. ROFL….
😀
Josh ara manikkoor munpe scoot aayi ennu parayaan paranjju :p
ha ha… pakarathinu aale ivide nirtheettalle poyathu…
😀 athe athe :p
pinney..nammude childhood romance okke evide ethi..pinne kandillallo..
athuu ezhuthanam ennu undu half way written aanu next part, but idakku vere orupaadu threads varunna kaaranam time adjust cheyyaan pattiyillaa 🙁 athu ezhuthi complete cheyyanam…
and also, post something on your ship experience.. variety is your haemoglobin right..
അയ്യോ ഞാൻ വാള് വച്ച് പട്ടിയായ കഥ നാട്ടുകാരെ അറിയിക്കണോ … കുറച്ചു എന്ധോക്കെയോ ആ സമയത്തു കുത്തികുറിച്ചിരുന്നു കാരണം ചുറ്റും ഉള്ളത് കടല് മാത്രമായിരുന്നു കൂട്ടിനു ഒരു seagull ഉം ആ കപ്പലിലെ ഏക പെൺകൊടി ഞാൻ ആയിരുന്നു ….
he he…
🙂
Beautiful.. As usual
thanks a lot…:)
Endearing !
thanks Shayar
Pleasure 🙂 and you can call me bunny :p
oh..okay.. I remember you mentioning it earlier, on that escaped one post..
honestly i don’t remember that :P.. but i remember you commenting on my ‘About section’ for my name’s reverse abbreviations :D..
ya.. you are right.. in the about page…
exactly 🙂
Who needs a candle light dinner to have a romantic time. Coffee with your loved one is also so special. Lovely !!
True…the most special…
not was, but ‘is’ and always…;)
Ah.. That will remain alive in memories so yeah it can be called “is” also.
ha ha…you are a coffee fan , right..for a punch, i changed it to coffee…
ya.. sulaimani is a good option especially after a heavy meals..
ha ha…you made your date..
have a book too.. as Aisha said…
Yes, yes perfect date ❤❤
yyoo..yyoo
Edo Aishu .. milk powder chaya Alla.. inj nalla paal chaya kudichikka ? Anyways coffee valya teams intte drink aan 😀 pinne suliamani lemon add cheytha inj e parayuna coffee intt katha kazhiyum :p
Chai people nu entha koyappam.. Chai chai zindabaad!
Ohh pinne oru parishkaari vannekanu :p
rofl….
Molikuttikk Karyam pidikitty 😛
enneyangu kollu…
He he 🙂 ** Never ever say that ever..even if you don’t mean it**
;)..
Loved this. What a beautiful, evocative, way of expressing simple but deep romance! I could actually picture it in my mind.
really happy as you could feel it in your mind.. make it happen..;)
Yes, sounds perfect!
You are most welcome!
shooo..enthoru samadhanam kozhikkodan slang l vayikkan…jai jai kozhikode…
Appo inggakk Thalasseri slang kannedutha kandude 😛
anakku kozhappilla..aishu paranjonam, orithu’…
Zindabad!
Veruthe oru kaaryam illand, vadi koduth adi medichu ** entte oru karyam **
thalassery nnu bomb umayi varillenkil, we kozhikodians are ready to accept the neighbor people too…
Oho ninga randalum Kozhikod hai hi ho howw!! arinjilla :/
pakachupoyi ente balyam.. ennu koode cherkku..
enthooooo!! athe enne aaro vilikunnud.. nja pinee varame 😛
;)…
Chumma!! njagal vishunu polum padakkam pottikarilla.. pediyaa …
thanne.. thanne…
numma, evide poyalum, inganokke thanne.. athanne mallu specialty..
:/
fire and fierce words became blushing.. he he….and i recommend you to read the “magic of tea” which i mentioned in that post..
oh.. so sweet words… it is not the beauty of my words, but, the beauty of that simple pleasure
But let me tell you Akhila the beauty that you put is amazing. I just want to tell u one more thing Akhila someone has nominated me but I don’t know how to go about it can u help me pl.
what nomination.. for a date..;)
more like this…ha, have you read my blog description…
Seriously!!!…Words & Notion isn’t it….so every genre of writing has some sort of notion & see how beautifully you came up with this.:)
voh nahi…the description which we add..
Oho!! Thats a link right.. i missed to read…Chai biscuit,will come back to you after reading it.
ohkay.. I read that link..and as you know there are certain rules to be followed which is listed in that post. just make a replica of that post, and add your answers to that.. and nominate new people for the award.
and in my case, i made this an awardfree blog…so please…https://wordsandnotion.wordpress.com/2016/01/30/dont-think-me-rude-as-i-made-it-an-award-free-blog/
thanks for everything Akhila will do as u have told me.
i am quite sure that your princess will find the most precious moments during then
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Love this!!
Thank you.have a great time