She came to me; her cold hands touched my shoulders. It was a reminder of my words.
When I woke up there was no one else other than her image hanging on my walls of mind.
She came to me; her cold hands touched my shoulders. It was a reminder of my words.
When I woke up there was no one else other than her image hanging on my walls of mind.
wow – this is deep words with excellent feelings…
Thanks a lot.. Have a great time
Ente sare…….♥♥♥chechi great feeling wheni read sentences
Hello.. pravasi ayo…
Full ayilla…50% eppolum Nattila…! Kuwait aanu etu.so kuzappamilla..
This is very much intense as well as intriguing…
By the way, here’s the promised second part posted last eve…
https://thoughtsofwordsblog.wordpress.com/2017/03/22/14085/
Thank you so much…will check it soon
Thank you. Have a good day
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Intense words in two lines. Beautiful 🙂
Thanks Malini.. ya, there is some intense emotions behind the words..
Oh.. but what I wrote was not a fiction..and whatever I wrote so far were neither fictitious..
I really love you people writing tiny tales in a few words and convey the essence..it’s really an art..
Beautiful this is.
Is it.. thank you anchal
It’s a Win-win..
between did you post that one killing both
Not yet.you made me think about a happy ending.
Happy or sad endings.. both will fit in to your words perfectly
Continue to enlighten your soul and good things shall come.
Gastradamus is booming, please come on by and share your thoughts sista
Thanks .will check
Who is she???? Why you experience these kind of things frequently..I think someday even you will talk to me using me telepathy…
Between may I ask, how you people come up with such fictions…some wild imaginations or something somewhere happened..
You got it right.wild imaginations most of the times and sometimes it’s happened somewhere. Btw you can ask others too
Thanks for ttt….
you’re great!
Someone whom I love a lot
I’m really sorry for what I commented lately. I didn’t know it was real. Take care akhila. Much love
Oh dear jeni.. I know you were just kidding and that’s why i replied in the same lines too..so don’t worry at all..
This is too good !
Thanks shobha..
Just googling or is there any link?
I’ve got you covered. Here’s the link – https://www.facebook.com/terriblytinytales/
So eerie to see a reflection on the wall and you finally killed her. So now at peace. Superb words Akhila.
I don’t think souls revolve around us.Though they revolve they don’t have Human emotions,because they are liberated from body.soo that particular”she” maybe mother ,Friend,sister or even a baby.Soul resting in peace is western notion.According to Indian theory,it already have wore a new body.
Aha.. What all things are there in your master brain…even you differentiated the souls between west and east
Maybe hallucinations..but I have a promise to keep…
Promise?
Hmm.. shhhh
That was very beautiful Akhila , you told a story in a few words . To everyone it means something different . I am in awe of you !
Ya..it could be interpreted in any ways though it’s not a fiction..thanks a lot
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Stunning work.
Thanks dear..
Astonishing. ♡
Thank you..
Thanks a lot priya..how are you doing
Hmm.. Thank you
Beautifully capture every emotion
Thanks purva
Wow! Took me a while to sink in …
Thanks dear…
Feels like a dream…
Yes definitely.
Yaa I can
Some deep feeelings portrayed here. 🙂
Ya,you are right..it’s something very deep and so I just put some paint and powder to hide the intense emotions behind the same…
I understand, but sometimes these emotions are best not hidden, but most of the times these days we are forced to hide these emotions.
Thanks dear for reading between lines..
Always welcome. 🙂
Wow………..beautiful post
Thank you
Woww .. thats deep
Mm… much unsaid
Oh! That feeling grips your heart causing a strange and unpleasant ache, one that you simply cannot define. Poor guy, hopes they are together soon.
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