I am lost in a cloudy dusk
With desperate rainy eyes
I am harsh and heartless
With chaos over my crown
I am striving for that serenity
With freezing blood in my heart
Serenity
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Excellent work, Akhila 🙂 I especially love the line – With desperate rainy eyes. Keep up the good work!
Thanks a lot deepika for your kind words…. yeah, those rainy eyes speak volumes
You’re most welcome, Akhila 🙂
Thank you…happy that you could relate to that…hope you reach that state of serenity soon
Kuzhappam onnum ayeela. But korchude metaphoric aayirnenkil nalle aayinene.
Thanks sidharth for your inspirational words.. will check your posts soon
Yeahh i know. Sometymes things just hPpen for no reason.
Exactly….hats off to that wise man… but you know, very rarely you can have such an opportunity in this virtual world…
True. Thats why i do my part and try to make it happen.
Awesome piece of writing!
Nice, vpiram.com
Thank you
An excellent poem! It’s impressive that you are able to express deeply in just few lines.
Thanks a lot..sometimes expressing too much won’t serve the purpose..isn’t it
cool …from a long time friend with new blog 🙂
Actually you made me think of some real travels…manassinte yatra ayirunnu alle..
Haha..Now u might have got how bad my malayalam was..Enaku puriyale
How the comment which I added on someone else blog, appeared in my blog itself..is it the weirdness of wordpress or my carelessness..
and I am not understanding what you could read from that … strange…
Huh..Oh really?Which comment
Beautifully expressed.
I guess it is a dark place to be in.
Thanks dear
Pain emanates from this like breath from the lungs. Beautiful
Thanks pradita..you read it perfectly…
Thanks meena…mind is so confusing, no..it goes wherever it wants
Yeah true. Sometimes it doesn’t listen to us.
Striving for serenity the heartfelt emotions of yours in the form of poetry.. Lovely..
Entha malayala penkuttiye
Beautiful….’desperate rainy eyes’ loved that line…
Thanks a lot maniparna
Emotions r expressed beautifully
Thanks greesh
Thanks lot prashant
Nicely penned… I can relate with the feelings you express here 😉 Sigh …
Thank you so much…nice to know that you can relate to that
Beautifully written.
Akhila ma’am you never fail to amaze me with your amazing writeups.
Thank you so much akansha
Really? Another poem, Akhi! Adipoli, appol poet okkey varatte.
Beautiful.
Thank you