Part of the mind hums like a bouncing busy bee
Without letting in silence to break the emotive heart
Which is afraid to sit with the unsettling thoughts
While repressed emotions eat her from top to heal.
It was a bloodcurdling night which changed
The breathes of many in a flash of time
The ticks of that endless night is peeking
From every nook and corner of her mind
She replayed the past over and over again
Viewed all as in a black and white screen
It was impossible to let it go as she was
Being dragged to the throbbing hub of past
She assumed it to be a nightmare while
Aware that it was all real and upsetting
She didn’t try to end the tears sloping
Over her cheeks, cried her heart out
Which was holding on for long
Tried to be open to all her feelings
Didn’t hold them back and at the end
She closed her eyes, taking deep breaths
Wiped the tears, stood up and told herself
“Life is never assured and it’s just random
It has to move on whatever comes across.”
She started to accept what had happened
But still with a knot in the stomach
Which is growing day by day
She is alive in a coffin, trying hard
To learn the art of letting go, then again
Nervy in the divine Temple of acceptance
Simple wonderful !
Thank you Ben
Beautiful stuff Akhila ☺️
Thank you Nirant
Pleasure always for ur words
Nice….
Thank you Pravya
crying
for a lover
gone wrong
now she is
strong
my lady
of the lake!
Why do we always have a tendency to relate letting go and a break up
human weaknesses
Sadly..
There are many other “letting go s” in our path
of course!
Beautiful
Thank you Ramnath
Awesome, deep and poignant words so well written, Akhila and yes the past always compels you and you are lost there but once you Let Go then life changes and all is good. Lovely.
Thank you kamal
Welcome dear.
“The art of letting go”– difficult to master… 🙁 Wonderfully expressed, Akhila…
You are absolutely right..it is damn difficult to master.
Most beautifully expressed inner pain …and yes when tears roll down …after that you start gathering yourself ..and rise to the occasion with renewed vigour ..
Let go and get moving ahead … for that is the only way of life ..
Thank you so much..sorry being late to respond…I am really glad with your words which captures the inner pain of the crying soul..
Thank you Akhila …
Experienced a wonderful journey through the art of letting go,..
Bundle of thoughts and emotions,..
Leaving my heart ❤️ here,..
As a ticket of appreciation for a creative soul.
Thanks megs. I am really glad to find your kind words .
Yes, there was a bundle of emotions from the ups and downs of life…
*Token of appreciation