Something was deeply torn inside her
By an intense feeling of emptiness
Eyes were brimming with tears
With the least sparks for life
Even so she bottled up emotions
While falling into a dark black hole
Where time has got frozen forever,
And emptiness has taken over.
She reached at the core in a little while
And soon the tears came flowing
Before she could stop them
Forming an unending streamlet,
Completely Liberating her from
This soul wrenching emptiness
And finally finding a way in
To the ultimate serenity.
Tears do help to wash away the scars and hurt. An emotional piece Akhila!
Yes Radhika, but only upto some extent.. Sometimes i feel its a temporary escape
Beautiful post Akhila
Thanks a lot for your attention
You are most welcome Akhila. Have a wonderful day today
in the book
he wrote
the man
experienced
knew
how to love a woman
in bed
but he was evil
too
sorry
hope you feel happy soon!
Thank you..dont be bothered, i am alright..just some ups and downs
all of us do too.
Very well expressed. This is what I got from reading: it’s an old truism of living in worlds such as this one, to achieve a state of joyful balance we all have to experience the deepest sorrow. The good thing is, while sorrow hurts it never kills and never comes without its full complement of hope. After the shedding of tears necessary to purify one’s awareness comes joy providing one does not succumb to self pity.
Thank you shatara. But i am not quite sure if the cycle would end with the vibes of hopes as they say…if it has to then there need to be a creator watching all these cycles
I love the way you wrote this, Akhila. It inspires me with its beauty and ending! Hugs and blessing my sister!
Thanks a lot for all your kind words. It really touches my soul
Well written…… The lines are so beautiful…….
Thanks a lot pravya
hmmm. nice one.
Thank you
Excellent poetic words, Akhila and her tears finally took her to where she was searching in all her desperation. Lovely and apt picture too.
Thanks kamal. Hope she finds the eternal peace. Between the flower is from my amma garden
Oh wow that is great and what beautiful flower, Akhila. Welcome dear.
Yess, it’s lovely flower..NishaGandhi ..have you heard about that
No no not heard for the first time I am hearing. I don’t think it is seen in Mumbai.
There is a lot many beliefs connected to that flower.. it flowers only in the midnight. People await to see it blooming without sleeping..it’s said that it brings good luck to your house
Wow never knew that Akhila. Such rare flowers we have and they bring so much good luck too. Thanks for the info.
Brilliant
Thank you
Welcome
Thank you so much
Most welcome dear
Beautifully written… Although a painful read but it ends up with a positive note… Emotions can be felt while reading… Great write up indeed…
Thanks a lot ashish for feeling the pain also
Love the content
Thank you so much. I really appreciate that
Finding solace in the soul …soulful living
Yeah…it’s a mix of feeling..